Wednesday, November 23, 2016

True Love Knows No Boundaries? ? ? Comments

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It's a organized ring giving reunion in November- -
.....They will meet and scheme in drifts of snow.....
'Cause Christmas (opportunity) is arriving soon- -
And there are things they NEED to know.
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Susan Williams 10 February 2017

I remember the poem of the home invasion and the fear it engendered and how vulnerable it made you feel- -it is a sick feeling when your home no longer feels like a safe place to be. This poem lashes its tail with anger, this poem is taking its home back. The pendulum has swung. Just be clever as a fox, my dear friend, have all your traps in a row. I am glad the neighborhood is aware. The night is safer with a thousand eyes. So is the day. My goodness, this poem absolutely crackles with fury barely leashed, with justice demanding its due.

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Kim Barney 02 December 2016

A mystery poem, you say, and a very mysterious one, I say. What it sounds like is that perhaps people on your street have been going around stealing things from people's yards and/or homes during the holiday season. Please follow up with another poem when you catch them!

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Theodora Onken 02 December 2016

Thank you Kim for reading and commenting! You are partially correct and yes, i will follow up, should yet another attempt be made! Your reading my words is greatly appreciated.

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