Monday, December 3, 2007

True Love Is Not Disguised Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you are here to experience life,
Believing love to be sugarcoated...
Without some of it being emotionally
Noted with bitterness received at times.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Delilah Miller 03 December 2007

I think you're absolutely right. Truthful, vivid poem as always. deserve more than a 10, deserves a book. X's and O's

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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