True Love Ii (Goodbye) Comments

What a poet! I lost my breath. I really appreciate it

You better make good your promise. There are those who easily forget once they are away. I know you are not one of them.

So sweet. I believe your loved one would understand your reason for leaving. Anyway, it is but temporary and you promised to return. These were captured beautifully in the poem. Nice work.

difficult to say good bye but all good things also have to end..life moves on.. well done! keep up the good work..

Great to see someone so young writing poetry like this, Jhustin. Please keep it up, you show a great deal of promise. In fact, if English is your second language, and I would assume that as you live in the Philipines it is, what you're writing is amazing.

I can feel the words completely because I am just passing my days with the same feel.....the poem make me sad....................................................

Your words are very relatable to young couples in love.

May your aspirations be fulfilled. Good poem. It will encourage young lovers to become established.

hi..this poem is so lovely and touching me.. i specially like some part of it: I thank you For the wonderful memories we shared All the sweetest moment’s we had And I hope you can forgive me for being selfish they're really true to me (it happened to me once) and you wrote it very well..good writing :)

GREAT! ! ! Keep it up. I can to relate to each of your poems. They are very good.

Indeed, a great piece, Jhustin, touching...

nice one, keep it up!

Thanks for wanting another comment on your poem from me ;) Saying goodbye is never easy...but when it is the 'right' thing to do...we must follow our heart! Nice poem although a sad one..

You portray it well, I think, but I've never been a guy. It seems very real. Why wouldn't the speaker even keep in touch while he was gone-'cuz he'd miss her too much to think straight? Reminds me of Jane Austen's novel Persuasion. The heroine persuaded by her friends to give her lover up, still loved him and regretted doing that; when he did return w/his circumstances improved, she still loved him and of course it ended happily ever after. The only next question is whether it does ever happen so in real life.

telling the experience of sacrifice for the liebe is somthing hard to catch.u r telling the deepest of that bravely. very nice write. i like to read more of u. thanks for the invite.

It's very touching and heart felt.

very good writing skills.. :)

They say...let someone go...if they come back...it was meant to be...Good luck on your life's journey in love..your poetry shows merit...your ability to convey your feelings is a gift...keep on writing and I am sure you will write about ahappy experience in your life soon.

leaving the one you love is the worst thing you can do

i like this poem. as it is talking about the reality.i am new comer.could you please tell me your opinion about the poem i wrote.thanks alot