True Love Ii (Goodbye) Poem by Jhustin Sanao

True Love Ii (Goodbye)

Rating: 4.2


This might be the last time
I would have a chance to say goodbye to you
Because I’m going to leave you tomorrow
To persuade my dream of being the best for you

It’s really hard for me to let go of you
Because you are my everything
But for me to become the best
I must make some sacrifices

I thank you
For the wonderful memories we shared
All the sweetest moment’s we had
And I hope you can forgive me for being selfish

I just wish I could see you before I leave
I wish I could hug you one more time
I wish I could kiss your lips
For the last time

I hope you understand
I don’t want to leave you
But that’s life
We must take chances

And I promise you
That when I come back
You will not regret
The decision I made….

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
So Close 15 November 2012

I can feel the words completely because I am just passing my days with the same feel.....the poem make me sad....................................................

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Philo Yan 14 November 2012

Your words are very relatable to young couples in love.

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Asif Andalib 14 October 2012

May your aspirations be fulfilled. Good poem. It will encourage young lovers to become established.

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 13 July 2011

hi..this poem is so lovely and touching me.. i specially like some part of it: I thank you For the wonderful memories we shared All the sweetest moment’s we had And I hope you can forgive me for being selfish they're really true to me (it happened to me once) and you wrote it very well..good writing :)

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Kameron K 16 March 2011

GREAT! ! ! Keep it up. I can to relate to each of your poems. They are very good.

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Hachim Mohamed Houssein 15 November 2015

What a poet! I lost my breath. I really appreciate it

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Nicanor P. Tiosen 02 February 2014

You better make good your promise. There are those who easily forget once they are away. I know you are not one of them.

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Nicanor Tiosen 22 August 2013

So sweet. I believe your loved one would understand your reason for leaving. Anyway, it is but temporary and you promised to return. These were captured beautifully in the poem. Nice work.

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Anita Sehgal 19 November 2012

difficult to say good bye but all good things also have to end..life moves on.. well done! keep up the good work..

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Red O'mara 16 November 2012

Great to see someone so young writing poetry like this, Jhustin. Please keep it up, you show a great deal of promise. In fact, if English is your second language, and I would assume that as you live in the Philipines it is, what you're writing is amazing.

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