Monday, March 26, 2012

True Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

True love is
the look into your eyes
that is meant for you alone,
a gentle kiss that says everything will be all right,
...
Read full text

Lawrence Hiung
COMMENTS
Parithi Muthurasan 28 March 2012

a gentle kiss that says everything will be all right, a hand held in just the right way at the right time, a hug gives you comfort feel.....very nice lines

1 0 Reply
Jennifer Chalk 26 March 2012

This is very gentle, true love indeed, very touching poem, thank you.

2 0 Reply
Dave Walker 26 March 2012

A really great poem, like it, a great write. may i invite you to read my new poem called, Fate.

0 0 Reply
Lawrence H 26 March 2012

My simple definition about True Love in this poem. True Love needs polishing until like a diamond and diamond is Forever.

0 0 Reply
Lawrence Hiung

Lawrence Hiung

Malaysia
Close
Error Success