Sunday, April 25, 2010

True Love Comments

Rating: 3.9

When I first saw you
You totally blew me away
With your beautiful face and gorgeous smile
It feels like love at first sight
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Jhustin Sanao
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Nicanor P. Tiosen 02 February 2014

There is always a right time. Perhaps, now you may not yet be prepared but soon enough you will be ready to fight it out agains anyone who may try to dissuade you.

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Simon Odhiambo 19 November 2012

I like it...if you love someone, set them free. A nice one.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 17 November 2012

After reading your poem, its reminds me a long before and want to say wordless tune but endless rhythm. its so simple but expressed the love what we feel every moment. i will read more.

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Ramesh Rai 15 November 2012

after reading your poem i feel like love at first sight. brilliant write my frnd. keep it up. may god bless you

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So Close 15 November 2012

true feelings...from the words I can realize that how hard your love....and how sad you are, at the time of writing this poem...I really enjoyed it! ! ! »so close«

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Philo Yan 14 November 2012

I think what you have written comes from a genuine place in your heart. Keep writing and try to get a smoother flow or rhythm.

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Shahana mahazin 27 November 2011

i just wish we could freeze the moments were together.. i liked it...simple..poem wth simple words..

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Adam Omar 14 July 2011

They seem more like prose than poetic to me. The message though is painful & it captures emotion which is vital.

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 13 July 2011

hey..i like this poem.. somehow you wrote it very truly about true love and the feeling we feel about it.. nice poem :)

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Diwakar Bhatt 07 July 2011

keep writing.......good.

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Philip Jose 25 June 2011

bravo, so good, so determined

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Ineffable Kebbs 28 March 2011

it reads like a compilation of different lines from these popular love songs idea of ur itention is there but lacks in originality

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Yoseph Lupu 28 March 2011

I like your wriiting! you have to shorten your lines, so we can feel the rhyme /musicof the poem..for example..as I found not with much thought: 'some people, are sad of our love, I know, that I am the one to bleme, they say, I'm not so good for you even not, so perfect too.' you don't neet to put heavy words! continue writting...you are good!

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Kameron K 16 March 2011

Is this personal? Or just made up? It's really good either way. Good job.

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Oyeleke Mary Oluwadunsin 14 October 2010

Nice poem. did you fantasize this or experienced it?

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 September 2010

full of romance and pain pain and love acceptance and giving away for the sake of love nice poem thank u for sharing

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Dove Allen 30 August 2010

Another look at a poem allows one to 'see' again with different eyes...see previous comment I made Jhustin...but I will expand my thought again to give you the encouragement you need. Letting the beloved go...is a gesture of 'real' love.Sometimes we have to accept that there is no future in some desires. Let life guide your heart and know when the time is right...you will fulfill your dreams...best wishes on your 'journey of love'! :) Nice heartfelt poem!

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Ken E Hall 17 August 2010

True love could not be better, a true love poem fron the heart +++10 regards

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tandi toxins 16 August 2010

your poem is so real so fake stuff i love it

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Jenny Gordon 15 August 2010

Sounds so real. And so romantically hopeful. I daresay if she loves him, she will wait for him.

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