When I first saw you
You totally blew me away
With your beautiful face and gorgeous smile
It feels like love at first sight
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I like it...if you love someone, set them free. A nice one.
After reading your poem, its reminds me a long before and want to say wordless tune but endless rhythm. its so simple but expressed the love what we feel every moment. i will read more.
after reading your poem i feel like love at first sight. brilliant write my frnd. keep it up. may god bless you
true feelings...from the words I can realize that how hard your love....and how sad you are, at the time of writing this poem...I really enjoyed it! ! ! »so close«
I think what you have written comes from a genuine place in your heart. Keep writing and try to get a smoother flow or rhythm.
i just wish we could freeze the moments were together.. i liked it...simple..poem wth simple words..
They seem more like prose than poetic to me. The message though is painful & it captures emotion which is vital.
hey..i like this poem.. somehow you wrote it very truly about true love and the feeling we feel about it.. nice poem :)
it reads like a compilation of different lines from these popular love songs idea of ur itention is there but lacks in originality
I like your wriiting! you have to shorten your lines, so we can feel the rhyme /musicof the poem..for example..as I found not with much thought: 'some people, are sad of our love, I know, that I am the one to bleme, they say, I'm not so good for you even not, so perfect too.' you don't neet to put heavy words! continue writting...you are good!
Is this personal? Or just made up? It's really good either way. Good job.
Nice poem. did you fantasize this or experienced it?
full of romance and pain pain and love acceptance and giving away for the sake of love nice poem thank u for sharing
Another look at a poem allows one to 'see' again with different eyes...see previous comment I made Jhustin...but I will expand my thought again to give you the encouragement you need. Letting the beloved go...is a gesture of 'real' love.Sometimes we have to accept that there is no future in some desires. Let life guide your heart and know when the time is right...you will fulfill your dreams...best wishes on your 'journey of love'! :) Nice heartfelt poem!
True love could not be better, a true love poem fron the heart +++10 regards
Sounds so real. And so romantically hopeful. I daresay if she loves him, she will wait for him.
There is always a right time. Perhaps, now you may not yet be prepared but soon enough you will be ready to fight it out agains anyone who may try to dissuade you.