True Love Poem by Jhustin Sanao

True Love

Rating: 3.9


When I first saw you
You totally blew me away
With your beautiful face and gorgeous smile
It feels like love at first sight

Having you beside me
Makes me a better man
You always bring out the best in me
And that’s one of the many thing I like about you

But some people are suffering because of our love
And I know that I’m the one to blame
Because they say that I’m not good enough for you
That I’m not perfect for you

I know that you don’t want me to go
And I know that you love me just the way I am
But I want you to have the best
For that I need to be the best

Even though fate is breaking us apart
I swear I will never forget you
Because when I think of you
I don’t feel that I’m alone

I just wish we could freeze the moments were together
All the happy memories we had
All the sweetest moment in our life
Even the worst thing we’ve been through

But for now I want to break-up with you
Not because I don’t love you because I do
I just want you and those people to see that I could be perfect for you
That we are meant to be together

I am asking you if you could wait for me
I promise that when I come back
I will prove to you and to those people that I’m perfect for you
I just want you to believe in me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philo Yan 14 November 2012

I think what you have written comes from a genuine place in your heart. Keep writing and try to get a smoother flow or rhythm.

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Shahana mahazin 27 November 2011

i just wish we could freeze the moments were together.. i liked it...simple..poem wth simple words..

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Adam Omar 14 July 2011

They seem more like prose than poetic to me. The message though is painful & it captures emotion which is vital.

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 13 July 2011

hey..i like this poem.. somehow you wrote it very truly about true love and the feeling we feel about it.. nice poem :)

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Diwakar Bhatt 07 July 2011

keep writing.......good.

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Nicanor P. Tiosen 02 February 2014

There is always a right time. Perhaps, now you may not yet be prepared but soon enough you will be ready to fight it out agains anyone who may try to dissuade you.

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Simon Odhiambo 19 November 2012

I like it...if you love someone, set them free. A nice one.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 17 November 2012

After reading your poem, its reminds me a long before and want to say wordless tune but endless rhythm. its so simple but expressed the love what we feel every moment. i will read more.

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Ramesh Rai 15 November 2012

after reading your poem i feel like love at first sight. brilliant write my frnd. keep it up. may god bless you

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So Close 15 November 2012

true feelings...from the words I can realize that how hard your love....and how sad you are, at the time of writing this poem...I really enjoyed it! ! ! »so close«

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