# # True Integration - A Double Etheree Poem Comments

well structured....good diction and thought provoking...thanks for sharing 10+

I love your ending. This is a difficult form that tends to throw grammar to the curb to make it fit, but you do a minimum of that here.

Perfectly chosen words which suit well the double etheree; but would still be a great poem in any other form as well; as it's the ideas which are most palatable.

If all men (and women) agree to be equal, integration will truly last....but let's be realistic, not everyone is a good apple. The ending is what made the poem for me, I don't know all the details about integration though, , , , But what I do know is that the writing style (double etheree, is it?) is fantastic and challenging, so I applaud. Good write.

brilliant thoughts in a brilliant style.. honest and practical theme a tough one 10+++ lovelots, Maia

Good form. Practical thought. Nicely composed. deserves 10++++

I agree with your last lines. Profound write. Kind wishes, Sandra

The structure and the write both had came out wonderfully. Very interesting in layout with meaning theme.

Funny I just read your poem about money now I'm reading this piece. Lets face it the reason politians want integrration is to make their country money. You are right I should be able to go anywhere in the world and say to another person 'You are my brother' full stop no reason given is, is. -10

true words..... nice write! n nice formation too! !

Rightly said 'it should start from with every one'! Beautiful form and theme with a nice message! Congrats!

brilliant.....well done

'True Integration' is necessary in the world. Thanks for speaking to this issue.

A very good poem written about a very good subject. Good Write. Lynn

the revolution must indeed take place in each one of us....that is the only true revolution...

Wow! ! ! You have skillfully formed this poem...well done in profoundness...10+++

good meaningful write...thanks...10

INTEGRATION is one which will truly last if it does start from within every man Very true Samanyan..........10/10.

INTEGRATION is one which will truly last if it does start from within every man true so very true............the integration that shall last for centuries and beyond time is the one that shall come from within..........Vitamin P cant do much except to attract few gullible voters and grab headlines

A vey true and thoughtful write.Needs everyone to realise....Winnie