True Independence Comments

3) The last one: The Indonesians speaks the Bahasa Indonesia. One languge for all corners throughout Indonesia. I bow deepest for my homeland. And One Country, not divided in so many smallers states. Of course they have their own dialects, but all inhabitants do speak the Bahasa Indonesia. Thank you so much that you gonna read this. My response is a RESULT of your poem TRUE INDEPENDENCE after having revisited this poem.

2) I continue this, since I have more things to tell you, thank you for your attention: CONT.enemies in the government who fight him, since he is truly honest. Only the death penalty is restored since he became president to fight the import of forbidden (addiction) tablets.from abroad. I am proud to tell you about The Republic of Indonesia that this great country of more than 4000 islands has One National Language (the late First President had done that Ir. Soekarno)

Indeed, what is TRUE INDEPENDENCE? ! For example, I KNOW that my homeland has got true freedom now during th reign of Ir. Jokowi, the FIRST Indonesian President sans corruption, can YOU imagine that? A country of more than 3000 Islands and Isles, since 1945 they speak ONE national language, the Bahasa Indonesia, but NOW during the government of.Ir.Jokowi there is no corruption anymore, at least he is not corrupt, but he has many

Yes! ! ! To free the people from all the odds of life! ! ! ! ! ! Mankind on earth, Able to gain wisdom and understanding; Overcoming poverty. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Well said dear poet, this is today's crying need... and also too much of patriotism, or narrow nationalism can lead to nowhere.

A handful of power greedy politicians are ruling the roost/The people down below are still fighting a battle to gain independence.....correct observation! Beautifully put.......10/10

Liked the ultimate stanza. Powerful and insightful lines. So very true. Brilliantly crafted and conveyed. To my Poem List.and 10+++

A powerful and meaningful poem. I concur absolutely with the deep and honest sentiments of the great Poet. A must read and a wake up call to politicians who must serve their countrymen first and foremost.

True independence will come when people get recovery from poverty, politics and divisive rule.This poem is very thought provoking. All people should get equal rights and opportunities. Poverty should be eradicated.An amazing poem is excellently penned...10

Wisely written.....thank u, dear friend........anjandev roy.

IIndependence from poverty, politics, divisive rules Independence from inequality, reservations and preferences Independence from slavery of our own thoughts............ Indeed so it be, from our own thoughts. Excellently worded, by the way Wishing yiou Happy Independence Day, Asim Sir! A 10 Ful score and much much more!

Its a painful reality. When we struggle to be free we are all one but get separated when the ruling class forgets what is is we were struggling for. They do exactly, if not worse, what the oppressor was doing. The moral of the story...life is a life long struggle and am glad you have made your contribution by writing this resistance poem. Aluta continua!

Quite true! True independence is hard to get!

We are still slaves of our thoughts and some greedy politicians....100+ Independence from poverty, politics, divisive rules Independence from inequality, reservations and preferences Independence from slavery of our own thoughts.