Sunday, July 11, 2021

True Illumination. Comments

Rating: 5.0

You cut life,
Thin, thin, thin
You trod along
Trying to,
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Sandra Feldman
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M Asim Nehal 12 July 2021

Free flowing poem with impeccable rhyme. Loved it 5*****

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Varsha M 12 July 2021

Yes Sandra i agree with you completely. Without love life is unimaginable in fact unlivable. Every moment we have to work things out ehich need love to see the best in them. Good composition.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 July 2021

A loveliest honest poem but very thought- provoking poem for me personally, thinking along in the flow of the reading, so is life, I reckon, I have enjoyed enormously,5 stars full Thank you so much for sharing dear Sandra.

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Dear Sandra, Your poems are always powerful with a strong message.5 stars

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 July 2021

The many intricacies of love and life woven and expressed powerfully.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 July 2021

Beautiful poem so discerning. Great thoughts to ponder about.

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Jonathan Grover 11 July 2021

It's calling like a shining star... beautiful.

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Li Su Pen 11 July 2021

Very wise. Thank you

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 July 2021

This is amazing poem, to all beautiful brims, excellently rendered and Beautifully thought. I have found BEAUTY in your words dearest Sandra.5 Stars Fullest on TOP.

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