Wednesday, August 12, 2020

True Fate... Comments

Rating: 4.6

She thought she had power
Only to discover
Humility is above hour
Scribbling all that matter
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Varsha M
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 18 May 2021

Beautiful thoughts on the joys of service and devotion. Exquisite!

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Captain Cur 21 March 2021

The proverbial light in the darkness! Excellent write. Power comes in many guises, a life of service is an empowering experience.

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Anjandev Roy 21 March 2021

Sublime piece.....like it....thank u...

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 February 2021

Beautifully conveyed and crafted poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 February 2021

What a wonderful and meaningful message to humanity. The closure line says it all.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 January 2021

Life goes on....on and on! Excellent piece

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Randhir Kaur 25 December 2020

True fate to acquire happiness. This is so real words.

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Jagdish Singh Ramana 25 December 2020

A beautiful poem with a great messag and the poet's note itself has to say.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 October 2020

Life goes on, on one sound Do good until last breath sound You never know You might be fulfilling angelic wow.. Serving the poor and destitute. you find meaning. in your search after meaning you are finding it. actually only in serving and loving the poor we find greatness and fulfillment. tony

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Suresh Kumar Ek 25 September 2020

You can bring smile On the faces of many As a poet and by profession. Be blessed Varsha

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 16 August 2020

Inspiring and well crafted 10++

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Mahtab Bangalee 16 August 2020

Fate! What's that I do not know but the creative mind and activated hands is the best in this incessant time being world time is unstoppable no stoppage anywhere of it with this time to be the server of welfare is the great religion and to serve well is the sign of true philanthropy and the golden shine fate of humanity

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Mahtab Bangalee 16 August 2020

You might be fulfilling angelic wow Serving the poor and destitute Whatever be my ultimate fate.....beautifully written that serving good makes heart lofty and angelic divine; congrats for being selected this beautiful poem as POD....deserves always 10+

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 August 2020

Humility is above hour Scribbling all that matter Be it eleventh hour Or the twelfth one sure Life goes on, on one sound Do good until last breath sound You never know PAR EXOLENCIA FROM ANY DISTANT STAR

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 August 2020

Humility is above hour Scribbling all that matter Be it eleventh hour Or the twelfth one sure Life goes on, on one sound Do good until last breath sound You never know PAR EXOLENCIA FROM ANY DISTANT STAR VM

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M Asim Nehal 16 August 2020

Trade of smile is the best business, No losses all gains.10+

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 16 August 2020

Life is all about doing good and service to others. To bring a smile on somebody's face is a great virtue. Wonderful poem Varsha. Heartiest Congratulations on your POD

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Chinedu Dike 16 August 2020

Really a fine and lofty thought, well articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Rajnish Manga 16 August 2020

Do good until last breath Serving the poor and destitute acquiring happiness.... bring smile on other's faces.... //.... The central theme of the poem is highly commendable and worthwhile. It shows the concern for fellow citizens. Thanks and Congrats.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 August 2020

Life! ! You never know what is ahead! Able to overcome the obstacles with the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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