True American Beauty Comments

Excellent, a well crafted piece, I feel this would be a very powerful spoken poem due to its strength of rhythm. Voilence breeds violence a strong message delivered. Yet you also touch upon the violence against nature and chemical use and interweave them effortlessly into the body of your poem, well done.

this is truly inspiring man love it! across the heathen land....what a line fair play to you 10+++++