Suddenly everything seems clear.
Ports of golden past towards 'present' are gliding
Aft yonks charm is showering its drizzle;
Though stink of foul weather has not yet subdued.
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beautiful.........do i need ti say more cause i don't think words would express what i want to say cause it is beyond explanation......... thanks for sharing love, payal
Thanks for sharing. Life should move on so should we with time with an positive note as the ending of your work.
Indeed a remarkable attempt on life and time! The choice of words apt has done wonders on the technical perfection of the lines. It is one of your best poems ever.Thank you for inviting to read
lovely great write................bit imagery wonderful expressions :)