Even if it sounds like true
even if samanyan believes it to be true
would Paraman [god] find it true
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Only God knows what is true for He alone can discern the thoughts and intents of our hearts. Fascinating write. Kind regards, Sandra
Paraman (God) is inside one's heart. One should look for Him inward and not outward.
So true..God cannot be pleased by words alone.He can foresee the truth behind every thought n action n that's all that matters....very meaning write.....Sir i m not rating ur poems coz as usual ythey r beyond 10...: -)
If we could all listen for the truth behind the ego, then act on that alone, the anxiety and fear in our world, would surely disappear. A thoughtful write.
I think nearly everyone who reads this fine poem, samanyan, can relate to it. It seems we all pray to what we percieve of as our God, reciting time worn prayers which say, as your poem pointed out, nothing of our self or our feelings towards whatever God we pray to. It is a very interesting and effective write. Carl.
To find your true self is a wonderful thing...great write Samanyan 10+++
What is true in this world except you to yourself.........True words always come out to your poems written so lovely! ! ! ! ! !
'bring out the truth in you'... the line i liked most in this write...truthful words
to be true is just fine but to tell no lies, i think, there are some who can't manage..naizz
more wisdom revealed in this poem...and yes if it quacks like a duck...and looks like duck....it isn't always a duck....
flowing with truth concepts flowing with depth... thoughts' provoking write... evokes us to reflect 10++
There's a saying be true to your deeds and they will also be true to you........Beautiful poem written with depth meaning! ! ! 10++
samanyan, It is remarkable poem. when somebody pray with own words and it is sincere a voice, I think that this a pray, god will listen...10... Thank you for the your kind comment... Best wishes, Tsira
You are right Samanyan....only when you pray in your own words, the true meaning is revealed...otherwise, it is a mere recitation Nice meaningful poem
People look for truths. BUT, many like lies that sooth at the time. Though, as W. Shakespeare wrote ' to thine own self be true '.
be true to your heart.