Monday, May 18, 2009

# True Comments

Rating: 5.0

Even if it sounds like true
even if samanyan believes it to be true
would Paraman [god] find it true
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Louis Rams 30 May 2009

be true to your heart.

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Indira Renganathan 22 May 2009

A true search of the Almighty

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Sandra Fowler 22 May 2009

Only God knows what is true for He alone can discern the thoughts and intents of our hearts. Fascinating write. Kind regards, Sandra

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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 May 2009

Paraman (God) is inside one's heart. One should look for Him inward and not outward.

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Shweta Advani 21 May 2009

So true..God cannot be pleased by words alone.He can foresee the truth behind every thought n action n that's all that matters....very meaning write.....Sir i m not rating ur poems coz as usual ythey r beyond 10...: -)

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Bob Blackwell 20 May 2009

If we could all listen for the truth behind the ego, then act on that alone, the anxiety and fear in our world, would surely disappear. A thoughtful write.

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Carl Harris 19 May 2009

I think nearly everyone who reads this fine poem, samanyan, can relate to it. It seems we all pray to what we percieve of as our God, reciting time worn prayers which say, as your poem pointed out, nothing of our self or our feelings towards whatever God we pray to. It is a very interesting and effective write. Carl.

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Fiona Davidson 19 May 2009

To find your true self is a wonderful thing...great write Samanyan 10+++

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Catrina Heart 19 May 2009

What is true in this world except you to yourself.........True words always come out to your poems written so lovely! ! ! ! ! !

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Kesav Easwaran 18 May 2009

'bring out the truth in you'... the line i liked most in this write...truthful words

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Naidz Ladia 18 May 2009

to be true is just fine but to tell no lies, i think, there are some who can't manage..naizz

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Barry A. Lanier 18 May 2009

more wisdom revealed in this poem...and yes if it quacks like a duck...and looks like duck....it isn't always a duck....

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Miriam Maia Padua 18 May 2009

flowing with truth concepts flowing with depth... thoughts' provoking write... evokes us to reflect 10++

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Catrina Heart 18 May 2009

There's a saying be true to your deeds and they will also be true to you........Beautiful poem written with depth meaning! ! ! 10++

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Tsira Goge 18 May 2009

samanyan, It is remarkable poem. when somebody pray with own words and it is sincere a voice, I think that this a pray, god will listen...10... Thank you for the your kind comment... Best wishes, Tsira

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Sandra Martyres 18 May 2009

You are right Samanyan....only when you pray in your own words, the true meaning is revealed...otherwise, it is a mere recitation Nice meaningful poem

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Joseph Poewhit 18 May 2009

People look for truths. BUT, many like lies that sooth at the time. Though, as W. Shakespeare wrote ' to thine own self be true '.

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premji premji 18 May 2009

who need hymns...except murdering self................

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Ency Bearis 18 May 2009

a depiction of reality...well implied..

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