Wednesday, April 13, 2005

Troubles In Love Comments

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My dear sweet love
I have so many problems
I know you understand me
Better than anyone
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Thomas DuBois
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Scarborough Gypsy 14 April 2005

Hi Thomas, Young love! Very sweet and painful. I tried to read your poem with a Texas accent. It was very good (the poem, not my accent) . You might want to amend the spelling errors. There are a few of them I noticed in the last stanza. Apart from that I really enjoyed it and felt the passion and pain you were expressing. Thanks Gyp's

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