Troubles Comments
Blood runs through the streets invisibly
Violence seems to have a history
No sure way to get out and away
So the troubles in her life seem to stay
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Your poems are good But u need them to flow more You should have less word on a line...... Get to the point quicker..... but I will give you a 10 Good writtin SKills
Again as your other poem...an advoacy and plea to change our current human conndition.....well needed, , , ,
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7/26/2025 5:26:52 AM # 1.0.0
Well, now this poem has the positive, hopeful ending that the others lacked. I can't say which is better because the writer is honest in all her words. Hell bent on telling the truth of what she knows. Not so sure about herself. An interesting storyteller she is. GW62