Wednesday, May 30, 2012

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Its been 16 years
And lies are all i hear
I'm living the life where i can't succeed
Ans where i can't be me
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Jacob Guinn
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Hazel Connelly 16 September 2014

I can hear this poem rapped I think it would sound good..

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Melecia Williams 30 May 2012

Your Poems Are Amazing To Me Because I Can Relate. No Matter How Depressed You Get I Hope You Still Keep Writing.

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Phil Charters 30 May 2012

Good write Jacob. Life can and will get better

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Steph Mcbride 30 May 2012

wow, it really makes you stop and think whats good and bad about your life, Its a really good and thoughtful written poem, this is what you call talent, it brought a tear to my eye xxxxxx

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Jacob Guinn

Jacob Guinn

San Ramon, California
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