Saturday, October 26, 2019

Troubled Waters Comments

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"Uh...
Captain? "

What is it now?
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 October 2019

Woah an amazing extraordinary poem with the ship captain and sinking ship in metaphor perhaps. You wrote it an awesome captivating at. Kudos. Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too titled, ' smart phones and smart cars...."

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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