Wednesday, February 2, 2011

Troubled Times Comments

Rating: 5.0

Troubled Times

When the day tires me to the last of my strength
Journey is miles away for the shores to reach
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Santosh Sharma
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Jessica Trujillo 11 February 2011

I really liked it even though i'm not one who prays much. Good job. :)

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Jenny Gordon 09 February 2011

Excellent depiction of life! As the veitable journey, which definitely wearies, sailing through troubled waters and nearly capsizing, taxed beyond your reason, the light obliterated, calling upon the Lord your Creator for wisdom and guidance to do His will....to know the way to go, and to bring you to the end, so very perfect! You expressed it beautifully. I quite like it!

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Kevin Carney 06 February 2011

What a beautiful and heartfelt prayer. God will never leave you in the lurch, he will test and see your inner strength. This prayer can be taken to heart. Fantastic words by the poet.10+

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Lynn Glover 03 February 2011

A beautiful prayer that anyone could use at anytime, because God always listens to prayer regardless of whether it is perfect or not. A very good and enjoyable poem by an excellent writer.

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Malaya Roses 02 February 2011

The poet pray to The Most Gracious God to save his soul in such humble way and hope for the best. Well written and sincere prayers will be heard by Him.

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Jenny Gordon 02 February 2011

Beautiful poetic depiction and description of life. But your assessment of God as a puppeteer is not Biblical. I love that you seem to ask Him to show you His Way to go, lest we flounder and drown. Only He can save us. Very well done. Excellent. I enjoyed this.

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Seema Chowdhury 02 February 2011

what a lovely and inspirational prayer it is. really liked it. only God Almighty has the power to drag us out of the darkness and troubled time.

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