Saturday, June 14, 2008

Trouble Shooting... Comments

Rating: 5.0

You, we, me, in life-
a single entity
Match, pair, couple,
all absurdity
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Ashraful Musaddeq 22 May 2009

Brilliant short and lovely poem.

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Naidz Ladia 09 January 2009

entity.absurdity equanimity neccssity r tongue twister..tho thz wrds hve different meanings but they r bound in one ''TROUBLE SHOOTING''.. LIFE S REALLY MYSTERIOUS., , , , one left, leaves one....all things has its own ending..while still alive, keep on movin...hpe ths will happen soon dear kesav, , ,

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C T Heart 25 November 2008

the people comprising our very existance in this enchanting world, like pandoras box will reveal who and what we are and will be...a philosopical or rather a psychological point of view from the maestro...such a wonderful advice to cherish. Another food for the thoughts. My highest score goes to you.

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Kesav Easwaran 29 July 2008

not at all...in the practical life we lead, the 'threes' have a lot of relevance...1) me 2) the ones i like 3) the ones i do not like…these three decide my fortunes almost jointly…

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Linda Ori 04 July 2008

Yes - it is expectation from others that messes things up. When we expect we open ourselves up to disappointment. Wise words, but diffifult to live by. It takes much time and effort, and often we forget the simple things - just live in the moment, and be the best person that we can be. Life will fall into place. Wonderful perspective, and worth a 10 from me! Linda :)

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Jayaprakash Panicker 28 June 2008

in an age where every one is singled out, and made ot fend for themselves, extolling them to laugh away the adversaries is a great idea. as shakespeare once said in as you like it, sweet are the uses of adversity, here read sweeter it is to laugh at them or laugh them away. really extolling indeed. jaypee

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Mamta Agarwal 27 June 2008

at the end of the day we are alone. life must go on.10 for this. even if you cry in the face of adversity. message to all humanity., you must laugh.

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Subbaraman N V 27 June 2008

'Laugh away all life's adversaries' - a fine message to the society! Thanks for a great write!

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Chitra - 26 June 2008

crisp and articulate i liked this one very much

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Aparna Kiran Mirajkar 24 June 2008

few words but they weigh a ton... very meaningful short poem.

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Thad Wilk 23 June 2008

Great advice on handling life's adversities Kesav! Splendid read! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Malini Kadir 19 June 2008

Trouble shooting is absolutely optimistic and sound! good title and superb style in content

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angelianne 1012 18 June 2008

Laugh away life's all adversaries… Equanimity necessity Absolute in adversities… very true...very nicely done..truly deserves a 10/10

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Seema Chowdhury 18 June 2008

laugh away all life's.......... wonderful, wonderful words, this is my style of expression i really appreciate this poem and the message you have conveyed through it. well done n take care

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Deepti Agarwal 17 June 2008

Hmmmmmm....Interesting! ! ! quite interesting...n the truth too :) liked it...

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Onelia Avelar 16 June 2008

I like the light playful construction of this poem - with lack of whole sentences, but a wise sentence by itself

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Lynda Robson 16 June 2008

Another well-written poem from you Ke, very interesting and good content, 10 Lynda xx

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Flora Gillingham 15 June 2008

Very nice, K. I love the way that you subvert your titles. Always interesting. Fx

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Kesav Easwaran 15 June 2008

it's about shooting you know, that's why a bit fast, vidi!

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Vidi Writes 15 June 2008

If this is how to shoot the troubles Then we have to learn shooting, loose no time Looks a bit difficult to aim the objects! But if we can do it... Ohh... i am sure, we all will have Ever Green smiles on our faces. Thank you for the technique you taught And the technique adopted in this poem. Both race with each other who is best? I rate both - best.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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