Thursday, July 21, 2005

Tropical Storm Comments

Rating: 2.2

No it wasn't what I thought.
No angel tears came down
from heaven, no other liquids
from that forsaken place,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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John Tiong Chunghoo 22 July 2005

storm haiku ---- blackout the family tries to speak lounder than the storm

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 22 July 2005

YES! No 'blubber' in this one...LOL. Nice Herbert! LSP

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 21 July 2005

Good poem Herbert.Nice flow. Well written. Thank you.

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