Thursday, September 15, 2011

Tropical City Comments

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Speak to me of youth, and breezes warmed by the sun
The breezes that falter down cool alleys
In the city built in the sun
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Vera Sidhwa
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Khairul Ahsan 15 July 2016

Your poem 'Tropical City' draws a picture before my eyes of a city that I've known well. Loved the flow of the poem as it unfolds. Thanks for drawing this beautiful 'city built in the sun'.

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Romeo Della Valle 15 September 2011

Impressive! I can identify with this well penned and poignant write since I come from a Tropical Island (Santo Domingo, DR) and I am very familiar with this beautiful environment you described in your thought provoking write! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more of your poetic and talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City....

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