Three brightly lit stars
lighting up the night sky
Three smiles shining like the sun
so warm, bringing tears to my eyes
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Ahhh, tres bon, Mademoiselle...Trois..? Oooo la la...Pour moi, une raison.Et petite femme jolie es quators. Vous et ecrivez fantastique, Lee...en pour vous, et dix! Francois/FjcR
Your poem reminds me of the song 'Three Coins in the Fountain.' I love it. Perfect 10 my friend!
I'm sure most readers would agree that a handful of souls make up their raisons d'etre. And all the wealth and or all the fame and all the power in world doesn't matter a jot if these soul-mates are taken away. Bless you for sharing this tender-hearted piece. love, Allie xxxx
I find often that French is used in the English language to inject a bit of romanticism into a feelingless monologue, thankfully not by you. You ony use a little but it fits so seemlessly with your english that you add rather than detract from the poem.
Lovely lovely lovely wonderful kids... All the best and more Roger
Another great poem.... Just wish I knew french.....lol Keep up the good work... Keith
Hey sis... best poem... best kids... love it! ! You should save this one, they will want to read it someday... Love ya!
This is beautiful and you say it so perfectly. Excellent Lee........diane
Ahhh, tres bon, Mademoiselle...Trois..? Oooo la la...Pour moi, une raison.Et petite femme jolie es quators. Vous et ecrivez fantastique, Lee...en pour vous, et dix! Francois/FjcR