Thursday, February 19, 2009

Trochilidae Comments

Rating: 5.0

To be a hummingbird, I
Wish to beat my wings in eights
Symbol of the ancients' hum,
Beckoning eternity.
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Elle Wolfe
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Ten and many stars.Very complicated verse and yet it is very crystal clear in meaning.I love the ending.If you get a chance please read my RAINBOW IN MOTION HAIKUS.Thank you.

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