Jasbir Singh

Jasbir Singh

Chadhiar, Kangra, Himachal Pradesh
Thursday, October 5, 2017

Triumph Over Uninvited Guests Comments

Rating: 4.8

I invited some guests to come and make their stay,
Sadly! Uninvited guests came in and occupied the place,
I asked happiness to come inside and stay,
She replied, ' I can't come in, until sorrow go away'.
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Jazib Kamalvi 16 October 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Jasbir. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 October 2017

Happiness, sorrow, anger, peace have been beautifully depicted as guests! A very amusing poem. Enjoyed reading it

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Gajanan Mishra 05 October 2017

beautiful write, anger and sorrow, peace and happiness

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Jasbir Singh

Jasbir Singh

Chadhiar, Kangra, Himachal Pradesh
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