Wednesday, June 4, 2014

Tristesse, Sadness Comments

Rating: 5.0

In Love,
The pain of the beloved is your pain,
Their happiness is also your domain
But if the loved one,
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Sandra Feldman
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Richard Wlodarski 04 June 2017

Such a heart-felt poem that it wounded my heart with its sadness. Beautifully written from the deep recesses of the heart.

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Kevin Patrick 05 June 2014

The pain of the beloved is your pain, Their happiness is also your domain Its a twisted conundrum when one has feelings for another to the point where their emotions are almost tied into your, there is almost a telepathic bond created in that relationship, so when two are separated it can feel like the death of once self, but we are all individuals and our paths are our own, we'll have people their for awhile but in the long run they'll be gone. A lovely write Sandra

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Mazhari David 05 June 2014

Beautifully rhymed... désespérément belle tristesse...* **

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