Friday, August 5, 2011
Triquatrain Sonnet For A Ghostly Ship Comments
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In the blue sky height, the red, strange sun's waves of light
Rend here and there the painful horizon making it mobile.
Touching the Southern Bight, they seem to reach the night,
Making the sea more empowered and more unable.
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Patti Masterman
05 August 2011
Wow, this is beautiful (and did I add, difficult?) You have certainly ace'd this form. It is totally awe-inspiring. And that last line, ahhh...perfect.
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8/15/2025 5:50:05 AM # 1.0.0
its Beautiful.! ....