Thursday, April 17, 2008

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Summer with my mother.


I t was the best summer I ever had or can remember,
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David Desantis 17 April 2008

This really got to me. What a beautiful poem. Your story was absolutely amazing, and straight from the heart. I'm sorry for your loss, i'm sure many will identify with this...Your a very good poet...check out my stuff if you get a chance

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Mark Nwagwu 17 April 2008

a beautiful poem filled with all the love of a son for his mother - I knew who her boyfriend was. It's so wonderful for a son to be her mum's only one - not like tepid tea from the flask, more like hot buns from from the oven. your poem is full of heart and style.

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