Saturday, August 30, 2008

Tripping Over A Memory Comments

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I keep tripping over a memory
that should have left behind.
My life has become a puzzle
and there are pieces I cannot find.
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David Harris
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Alison Cassidy 31 August 2008

What a thoroughly engaging phrase - to 'trip over a memory'. It gives the reader the feel of an aging author with a great sense of humor. Your poem is rather sweet and most poetic. I like it a lot. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 30 August 2008

Well memory gets worse over time, perhaps you'll lose it from your mind... Andy 10

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