Triplet. Insomnia Comments

In three short lines all the graveness of insomnia, a lovely three-liner

A precise and clever write on insomnia. A type of sleep disorder that many of us could relate to and causes devastating effects on our health. This poem resonates with me. Superbly penned with great rhyme.

to MyPoemList. :) :)

i'd suggest a comma after problems. but, hey, it is just bri thinking out loud! :) a lovely bit of verse, about a nasty little curse: problems! so, now V's returned to India in a flash, and she's about to make a huge splash... at a Welcome Home To You, Valsa bash... 'cause she's going to pass out loads of cash. save some for me! bri :)

endless problems causing sleeplessness aptly presented by u..

Nicely composed, I like this with the last line.

Nice..... Niight endless n problem listless!

A wonderful three liner. Problems are so many but solutions are at least thrice in number.

Problems are listless. Beautiful line.

That is why they ask us to count the sheep. Counting the problems instead of staring at them and appropriating them as ours would be a better solution, I think. A thought-provoking write, Valsa-ji.

Endless nights are familiar to me. Thanks for sharing, Valsa Peace