Monday, January 9, 2006

Triple Haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

A single dragon
can slay a lot of people,
with halitosis.
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Herbert Nehrlich
COMMENTS
Lori Boulard 09 January 2006

that first one had me practically spraying coffee through my nose! You are always informative, entertaining, or both.

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Mary Nagy 09 January 2006

You are sure enjoying these haiku huh? I don't think I've written any...........you do them very well and I like that you do them with more than just the one stanza. Sincerely, mary

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Gina Onyemaechi 09 January 2006

Witty, fresh, and poetically succinct, Herbert. Trouts in milk indeed! Last line bit of a sticking point for me, though. Can't say I agree with it. But that's just me. I think what I like about your poem's, Herbert, are the topics - so unusual and thought-provoking. I look forward to the next one. With admiration, Gina.

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