Once I was by hell spirits caught
They held me very tight
But until the end I fought
That was my end but for them was not
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When I read the poem I immediately thought of the biblical fight of the angel andthe man in the old testiment. I would like to know what inspired you. You put your words together very well. I was in your spot at every line. Well done. Tracy
Well thought out. Written words with a message. Easy to read and you get to the point. Nice trip to visit your work. DC
That was really good. Kind of eye-opening. Epiphany causing. I especially liked the part about 'Hope was my sword Faith was my torch Believe was my strength Now it's time for me to march'.
To overcome doubt in the face of trouble, by using faith your weapon.
Very nice work I like