Trip To Hell Comments

Very nice work I like

When I read the poem I immediately thought of the biblical fight of the angel andthe man in the old testiment. I would like to know what inspired you. You put your words together very well. I was in your spot at every line. Well done. Tracy

Well thought out. Written words with a message. Easy to read and you get to the point. Nice trip to visit your work. DC

nice. the imagery it conjures is interesting.

nice work man keep it up

hmm... very... well put great write

Well interesting poem.. good write

That was really good. Kind of eye-opening. Epiphany causing. I especially liked the part about 'Hope was my sword Faith was my torch Believe was my strength Now it's time for me to march'.

beautiful, very spiritual

To overcome doubt in the face of trouble, by using faith your weapon.

i like it it sounds very real