Monday, November 2, 2009

Trip To Hell Comments

Rating: 4.8

Once I was by hell spirits caught
They held me very tight
But until the end I fought
That was my end but for them was not
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Mohamed ElHallag
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Dev Poet 05 November 2009

Very nice work I like

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Tracy Owen 05 November 2009

When I read the poem I immediately thought of the biblical fight of the angel andthe man in the old testiment. I would like to know what inspired you. You put your words together very well. I was in your spot at every line. Well done. Tracy

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Deborah Cromer 03 November 2009

Well thought out. Written words with a message. Easy to read and you get to the point. Nice trip to visit your work. DC

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Tania S. 03 November 2009

nice. the imagery it conjures is interesting.

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Ahmed Abdalla 03 November 2009

nice work man keep it up

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Trenton Watson 02 November 2009

hmm... very... well put great write

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Eyan Desir 02 November 2009

Well interesting poem.. good write

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Mrs. Blue 02 November 2009

That was really good. Kind of eye-opening. Epiphany causing. I especially liked the part about 'Hope was my sword Faith was my torch Believe was my strength Now it's time for me to march'.

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Mehreen Mujeeb 02 November 2009

beautiful, very spiritual

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Obinna Eruchie 02 November 2009

To overcome doubt in the face of trouble, by using faith your weapon.

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***lovergirl3000 *** 02 November 2009

i like it it sounds very real

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