Thursday, October 19, 2006

Trio Of Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

The room surrounds my waking mind
Something feels unreal -
I watch from under hooded lids
Three figures in the mist;
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Linda Ori
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Charles M Moore 25 October 2006

Excellent love the idea of the dark influence, guess you wont be drinking that stuff again, well written

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Tranquil Ocean 19 October 2006

Wow...Great piece of work! ! ! I love the dark ones TO

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R H 19 October 2006

Wonderful opening line that had me hooked immediately. A masterfully composed tale from the darkside...Kind regards, Justine

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 19 October 2006

A W E S O M E WORK, MIDNIGHT DARKNESS ON TH' PROWL, OH YESSSSSSSSSSS! A FINE PICE OF DARKSIDE VERSE....OUTSTANDING RHYTHM & CRISP, TIGHT STRUCTURE......a very fine penning, linda '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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