The room surrounds my waking mind
Something feels unreal -
I watch from under hooded lids
Three figures in the mist;
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Wonderful opening line that had me hooked immediately. A masterfully composed tale from the darkside...Kind regards, Justine
A W E S O M E WORK, MIDNIGHT DARKNESS ON TH' PROWL, OH YESSSSSSSSSSS! A FINE PICE OF DARKSIDE VERSE....OUTSTANDING RHYTHM & CRISP, TIGHT STRUCTURE......a very fine penning, linda '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
Excellent love the idea of the dark influence, guess you wont be drinking that stuff again, well written