Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Trinket Comments

Rating: 5.0

I tossed a coin of chocolate
At the corner store, just bought it
In my pocket, I was keeping it for you
It's merely just a trinket
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Susan Lacovara
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V P Mahur 22 March 2014

Dear Susan, Very sweet feelings of. I loved it by my heart. Thanks!

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Gajanan Mishra 21 March 2014

attached for ever new, great love, I like it.

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Valsa George 21 March 2014

Though trinkets, (are they really trinkets...? I don't think everyone can write poem or sketch a portrait) they become priceless depending on the attitude of the donor and the kind of bond existing between the giver and the taker...! A sweet poem!

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Anthony Burkett 19 March 2014

A delightful rhythm... a well paced cadence... sweetly descriptive of a secret longing... Nicely done dear poet...

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Colleen Courtney 19 March 2014

Such wonderful imagery! Those little thimgs turned into a lovely poem so beautifully written!

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Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

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