Trifling Existence Comments

You have presented your deep feelings in the poem very well. Man is a trifling existence, he is like a bubble of water or an apparition here and then here not. If it had not been so, he would not have been an object of derision and laughter. His existence would have been saved and respected but now he is the victim of tyranny of big powers. I like your poem very much. The poem is rich both in thought and expression. Nice write. Please go to my poem 'WAR' and let me know what you think of it.