Saturday, February 7, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

except for the year
of dissolution
and one trip
to the mad house
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r james sterzinger
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Patti Masterman 07 February 2009

I do hope you're not really going anywhere because I really enjoyed this poem and would like to read much more from you. This is such a microcosm of a poem because, I believe everyone comes to themselves at some point to realize they feel so alone, no matter how many years have passed in the same place. In fact, even that knowledge can be daunting: where have all those years gone, did they really have an existence at all- how can there only be this left, now?

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