Friday, November 6, 2009
Trickles Ebb Comments
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As our longing smolders, wrecked
by basics we can't correct,
faith's fruit rots whole from neglect.
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Joshua Whiting
06 November 2009
Nice read - I can relate. Like your imagery and compelling message. We're all seeking the cure! Attention grabbing and insightful. Keep the creativity flowing.
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10/31/2025 11:57:47 AM # 1.0.0
This is deep and insightful to read, and I like your use of words especially these closing lines, 'Swelling forces must mature / if reservoirs shall endure / to offer essence to cure.'