Trickle Of Thought -3 Comments

note: the comment space didn't allow me to write a long comment all together, that is why I have to break it down to parts..I do apologize...thanks again to you Rose and to all of your readers

part 1/ Oh dear what is a fantastic imagination and fantasy images we are finding here in this golden treasure? murmur of a morning breeze, That flows through the window....

part 2/ by the way only few people who meditation the sea be able to see that the ocean waves goes to every directions And the waves on the ocean, Without permanent destination.

part 3/ on the other hand; these two new metaphors strongly attached to the meaning of happiness and sadness, as they are temporary as the age of human being, very interesting and provoking idea, well done dear Poet Rose, and you get a top mark for this lovely masterpiece of work.

Yes, there is no fixed route or time for joy or sorrow to travel. Sometimes happiness is followed by a fit of terrible pain. Sometimes an unhappy man may become suddenly joyful. Thus life is a swing between two points - joy and sorrow. When sorrows come, let us believe that it is only temporary. Such a thought will help us swim through all difficulties. A beautiful poem unraveling a great truth!

Yes. Happiness and grief are just seasonal in life cycles. Some seasons may last long some others end briefly. Equanimity is the key of peaceful life. A poem erudite on life 10+

beautiful writings on Happiness and sadness///

A king asked his minister for a few words on his rings. Looking at that if he is happy he may become sad and if he he is sad he may become happy. The minister advised him, " This time will also pass."

Short, cute and truthful...and the simile is too lovely...an adorable poem indeed...full mark 10

like murmur of a morning breeze, and waves of the ocean, great comparison indeed, under superfluous waves there is utter calmness at the depth, lovely.

The feelings we feel are forever transient. But whatever feeling we feel, we can feel God's peace in our heart, in the quiet of the morning, in the softest sound of the night. We can feel the love in our heart to share and to care. Happiness comes and goes and so does sadness. The only constant in this world seems the presence of God or what He stands for in our universe

Facing the ways of love and life! ! ! On earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Nothing is eternal in this life of ours, even happiness and sadness are temporary. In fact it is a very sad truth to realize all these. Dear Great Poetess, how sensitive sweetest are you in these words. A very caring and sensitive poem you created. A 10 Full Score! Again a very keen poem about the trickles of our thought. An amazing thought provoking poem. Magnificently worded. God´s Blessings in Abundance!

Yes true, we need to know enjoying the happiness. Thank you poet.

Without permanent destination......great piece. Thank u, dear friend. anjandev roy.

Yes, happiness and sadness are just temporary as life itself is temporary! One who realizes this fact, he can neither be elated with joys nor be broken down with sorrows! A wonderful poem with a very insightful thought content...10

All things on earth shall perish in due time. Just take both the good and bad events in life because everything is for the good. I love this poem, dear ate Rose❤️🙏😍..10+++

Happiness and sadness Are just temporary Like the murmur of a morning breeze That flows through the window And the waves on the ocean Without permanent destination....so sweet and sensitive... 10 +++++

We certainly can feel the flow and the temporality of feelings, thru the words in this poem and how well they all fit together. You, Rose have that wonderful talent of using and placing though, feelings and words, just the right way. Beautifully, they covey what you are feeling, making us so closely participate, too. The proof of a true and great poet., which are you. Enjoyed this little gem, very much!

Perfect. Wonderfully written prose with enchanting imagery. And the last two lines are to die for. Superb! Thank you for writing and sharing this gem Rose Marie.10+++ and added to my golden treasure chest. Take care.