Trickle Of Thought -2 Comments

Exact narration of fate.

So, true! Sometimes we build and build and in a moment or two all seems gone. But the building taught us a lesson and so did fate. After an intense period of grief, we tend to discover life with all its miracles again.

An intense study on fate...this thought speaks the reality only...Sometimes the wind Of fate aborts And sweeps away All the great things'....like this expression a lot .

Life is like that at times! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

All that walks/moves on a predictable path are mechanical things devoid of life. We call it life and can't expect that things fall in line. 'Leaving us nothing..', but that is life. Wisdom apart, a great write. It is stupidest thing imaginable if we paraphrase a poem in prose.

Life is ironic, isn't it? This trickle of thought carries the depth of a sea.

Reminds me of two songs: TWIST OF FATE by Olivia Newton-John and WIND OF CHANGE by Scorpions. Simply significant, dear ate Rose...10+++

Great wise words! To make a person realize the futility of haughtiness and value humility even more.10+

A 10 Full Score and myriad 10's more. UpToMyPoemList! Thank you so much for sharing, great poetess Poem Hunter Poem Site is certainly happiest with your presence here, and we as the members too. These are facts we cannot deny and must be said and written. Thank you so much for your innate well balanced thoughts.

The great poetess is constantly mastering the realities in our life. The truth weaved in such a natural way, sober but full of senstive senses such an adorable poem, with brilliant metaphors so subtile and yet so tender and touching.

The world well portrayed, true realistic and honest in this gorgeous poem. This excellent poem has a tad melancholic tune, bit sad but most beautifully worded and we just read the brilliant words of the great poetess, so peacefully formulated Absolutely, the wind of fate is constantly sweeping upon the world and how!

And sweeps away All the great things......true. Fine poem. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

An excellent work! I profusely admire the hought contents....10

Matters only the dream that drives to heights and hopes that the wind will change its direction next time it will help me the nothing will be changed in something.

How mysterious fate is. Is it controlling our life or guiding us through this life journey? A very well written poetic question. Thanks for sharing.

Sad but true. We are never complete masters of our destiny. Your poem says so in a soft poetic way but with undying truth. Beautifully written, dear Rose.