Sunday, August 25, 2019

Trickle Of Thought -2 Comments

Rating: 4.8

No matter how we drive
Ourselves to heights
Sometimes the wind
Of fate aborts
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Nabakishore Dash 26 November 2021

Exact narration of fate.

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Hans Vr 11 September 2019

So, true! Sometimes we build and build and in a moment or two all seems gone. But the building taught us a lesson and so did fate. After an intense period of grief, we tend to discover life with all its miracles again.

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Indira Renganathan 03 September 2019

An intense study on fate...this thought speaks the reality only...Sometimes the wind Of fate aborts And sweeps away All the great things'....like this expression a lot .

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 August 2019

Life is like that at times! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 August 2019

All that walks/moves on a predictable path are mechanical things devoid of life. We call it life and can't expect that things fall in line. 'Leaving us nothing..', but that is life. Wisdom apart, a great write. It is stupidest thing imaginable if we paraphrase a poem in prose.

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Nosheen Irfan 28 August 2019

Life is ironic, isn't it? This trickle of thought carries the depth of a sea.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 August 2019

Reminds me of two songs: TWIST OF FATE by Olivia Newton-John and WIND OF CHANGE by Scorpions. Simply significant, dear ate Rose...10+++

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C F 27 August 2019

Great wise words! To make a person realize the futility of haughtiness and value humility even more.10+

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 August 2019

A 10 Full Score and myriad 10's more. UpToMyPoemList! Thank you so much for sharing, great poetess Poem Hunter Poem Site is certainly happiest with your presence here, and we as the members too. These are facts we cannot deny and must be said and written. Thank you so much for your innate well balanced thoughts.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 August 2019

The great poetess is constantly mastering the realities in our life. The truth weaved in such a natural way, sober but full of senstive senses such an adorable poem, with brilliant metaphors so subtile and yet so tender and touching.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 August 2019

The world well portrayed, true realistic and honest in this gorgeous poem. This excellent poem has a tad melancholic tune, bit sad but most beautifully worded and we just read the brilliant words of the great poetess, so peacefully formulated Absolutely, the wind of fate is constantly sweeping upon the world and how!

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Anjandev Roy 26 August 2019

And sweeps away All the great things......true. Fine poem. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 August 2019

An excellent work! I profusely admire the hought contents....10

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Akhtar Jawad 25 August 2019

Matters only the dream that drives to heights and hopes that the wind will change its direction next time it will help me the nothing will be changed in something.

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Amir Marandi 25 August 2019

How mysterious fate is. Is it controlling our life or guiding us through this life journey? A very well written poetic question. Thanks for sharing.

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Sandra Feldman 25 August 2019

Sad but true. We are never complete masters of our destiny. Your poem says so in a soft poetic way but with undying truth. Beautifully written, dear Rose.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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