The young ones do not know as yet
Of the battles, the ships lost and wrecked,
When your straight silhouette was besmirched
Under high waterlines bedecked;
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You have got a perfect rhythm for your subject matter. It reads well aloud, very well indeed.
I think this is the favourite of the three I've read today so far.
Will come again tomorrow. A certain Canadian young fellah is beckoning me with replies to comments I've made earlier. He's called Wes Vogler. If you haven't seen any of his, pay him a visit. The cartoons alone are worth a visit!
Tom Billsborough
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You have got a perfect rhythm for your subject matter. It reads well aloud, very well indeed. I think this is the favourite of the three I've read today so far. Will come again tomorrow. A certain Canadian young fellah is beckoning me with replies to comments I've made earlier. He's called Wes Vogler. If you haven't seen any of his, pay him a visit. The cartoons alone are worth a visit! Tom Billsborough