Tuesday, August 12, 2008

Tribute To Evergreen Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

After years of togetherness, nearly three-score
I pen the Saga of being with you.
Of living and loving as never before,
And learning of freedom, and happiness too.
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Kris Smith 01 December 2008

You have been blessed Fay, you have tasted of something many others have not. In reading your petry you have moved on but not forgotten, this is why winning your friendship is so valuable, it will never be treated lightly 10 ++++ Chris

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Ashley Ormon 06 October 2008

Beautiful, beautiful poem. It has the prettiest flow to it, and it is easily seen that these words are sincere.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 03 October 2008

That's Beautiful Fay, Nearly three score I bet it went by so fast.. Andrew 10

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Lynda Robson 03 October 2008

A wonderful tribute to your husband and all the happy years you have shared, a happy feelgood poem, indeed ' A Love To Last Forever' 10 Lynda xx

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Kathleen West 25 September 2008

This beautiful poem is a loving tribute to your husband and the enduring love you have shared. Life has so many stages, but to stay close over time, and still love and laugh together, is very special indeed.

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Bob Blackwell 23 August 2008

Fay, congratulations on both writing this superb tribute and living and loving the same man for nearly sixty years. As we age we mellow and mature into fine and loving spirits together. This ones worth 60/60 but you'll have to settle for a ten. Bob

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James Timothy Jarrett 12 August 2008

Very beautiful poem. Love sincerely expressed in a wonderful way.

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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