Triano Hi Poem by me poet yeps poet

Triano Hi

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My lovely boy
then a very
young one

totally nude
wow was really cute
in his birthday suit

now must be
really bushy
grown up manly

still he must be
beautiful and handsome

youthfulness
lasts till 27
mainly in boys
then they look old

Tuesday, November 24, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: boy,boyfriend,friend,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
See how time transforms
not only nature
but humans also
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 24 November 2020

boy in manly shape with a divine youth need red wine no need the moon need seraphic room no need the music need a bed of long staying no need the sleep and dream need longer togetherness no need the day and sun and the life won't be over..........

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Richard Wlodarski 24 November 2020

Time ages our physicality, but our spirituality remains eternal.

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