Triangle Of Emptiness Comments

In your poem A Taste Of Earth, rhyming worked out for you. I think it restricted you in this one and made the flowery if thats the right word, language, become dragged down. Also, I feel bad, but when I read this, I kept thinking, 'Bermuda triangle'

hey scarlet......what a beautiful painting of words.............well, who knows maybe one day we'll face this kinda atmosphere...........well written piece

good job rocco, made me think about the world today

hmm... very interesting read i enjoyed it. its a great pieces.