Trial By Fire Comments

this poem is extremely deep. I love your style.

This is powerful and sad with a strong and defiant ending, good write.

woh..powerful indeed...liked the way you wrote it..keep penning

Wow very powerful and intense poem Joyce. I love it! ! !

Wow this poem is very deep. Spare me your lies And your transparent tears You grieve not your crimes You've lost track of your sins. My favourite lines just so powerful and really captivated my feelings toward those lines. Very strong write. :)