Trial Comments
Trial is on way as a mistake
Grief march as its dictator
Revive the fall that not emptied
Something hangs as persuader
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Trial is a mistake in hidden ways. This is definitely presented well in poem. Each line speaks of new essence.
The very ways of mankind on this earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.
Greedy life persists inside Grief is personal part unexplored Revoke the tears in a silent sniff For a smile that polish whole world Great thought in beautiful lines.
Even when grief stricken, we can cover our pain with a smile so that others won't grieve over us! Quite insightful!
Very insightful and brilliantly penned with amazing lines.......yes we are carrying painted smiles behind hiding distress over affliction or loss; sharp sorrow; painful regret that none cares to bother......and this is life....very well composed...10
Beautiful poem Salini. Thoughtful words..... Revoke the tears in a silent sniff For a smile that polish whole world... Very true said, we all hide our tears behind our smiles. Loved reading it. Wishing you a Happy and Prosperous New Year 2015. God Bless you!
Greedy life persists inside Grief is personal part unexplored Revoke the tears in a silent sniff For a smile that polish whole world The concluding stanza had great philosophical insight. Loved it. | Delete this message
Greedy life persists inside Grief is personal part unexplored Revoke the tears in a silent sniff For a smile that polish whole world The concluding para had great philosophical insight. Loved it.
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a poem for purification Greedy life persists inside Grief is personal part unexplored Revoke the tears in a silent sniff