Trespassers Will Be Prosecuted Comments

Class act by Asim, Thought provoking poem...10

This is fantastic. You've written something very good, here. Probably shouldn't mention aids- -maybe change it to the Zika virus. I'd add a few more things about nature- -rise in extinctions, vanishing bees, sea level- -take your pick. Aids is a touchy subject, nowadays, and it's inclusion in this poem makes the author appear homophobic, but it's YOUR poem, so I'll not say any more about it. Aside from that one complaint, I love every word of your poem. An inspired piece, well-realized.

~Do this, don't do that, can't you read the sign. A line from an American song from the 70s called Signs Your point is well taken

Do this, don't do that, can't you read the sign. A line from an American song from the 70s called Signs Your point is well taken

Very aptly worded.The conundrum well penned .Thanks for sharing

Rights! We all need rights. Yes, tresspassers will be prosecuted. Thanks for sharing.