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EEEEEEK! Great pace in this, though a little sad for me as I love these little creatures. Glad that you set up this write though.Love Duncan

Oh Mary would you like me to send you Amber Casper or Billy, they are all good mousers but Casper is the best. I too have so many mouse stories I could write a book on them. Your poem is great the flow just makes you feel for the tiny little rodent a great write cheers Sylvie

LOL! 'Mary Nagy, mean mouse-murderer'. Ha ha ha! ! Great fun. Gina.

Good on ya Mary - I thought this was funny and light despite Uriah's coments

This poem makes me sad, Mary.

Oh ho ho, sooo very HEE-larious, Mary! ! ! ! ! A terrific, action-oriented/emotion-laden poem as well as just plain funny. Thanks! Esther : ]

Mary, really funny poem... hope you don't get in trouble with the animal activists? Brian

Brilliantly funny, great write Mary.