I pass the shallow pool
And the water nymphs smile up at me
Out of the water, with angelic, childlike faces
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This is a very nice poem. That is exactly how I feel about my books just like it is my own world. I lovve it well done.
This poem has a the limpid clarity of a forest pool. I don't think you need the line of introduction (You repeat it at the end, so you must be worried that the poem's meaning won't be clear) . Just have confidence in what you've written.
It was an amazing, truly amazing poem. Beautifully and spontaneously written. I was lost in the reading. The title was very catchy. You have a great poetic sensibility, Emma. Please keep writing. Best Wishes. Naseer
beautiful poem i liked it also because i love books too.