Wednesday, January 27, 2010

Trees Of Paper, Pools Of Ink Comments

Rating: 5.0

I pass the shallow pool
And the water nymphs smile up at me
Out of the water, with angelic, childlike faces
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Emma Kessler
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Gul naz 14 March 2010

beautiful poem i liked it also because i love books too.

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Sarah Marie 20 February 2010

This is a very nice poem. That is exactly how I feel about my books just like it is my own world. I lovve it well done.

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John Raubenheimer 09 February 2010

This poem has a the limpid clarity of a forest pool. I don't think you need the line of introduction (You repeat it at the end, so you must be worried that the poem's meaning won't be clear) . Just have confidence in what you've written.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 07 February 2010

It was an amazing, truly amazing poem. Beautifully and spontaneously written. I was lost in the reading. The title was very catchy. You have a great poetic sensibility, Emma. Please keep writing. Best Wishes. Naseer

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