Friday, December 11, 2009

Trees Like Me. Comments

Rating: 5.0

If a tree could be me, and I the tree,
it would be fun to feel
wet droplets race,
after rain, down my body,
...
Read full text

Fay Slimm
COMMENTS
Tsira Goge 24 December 2009

There is a so fine poem... Trees it is really similar to poets And without them would be colourless our poetry.. 10x10... Merry Christmas, dear Fay.. Tsira

0 0 Reply
Ben Gieske 11 December 2009

Trees are fascinating and people are like some trees I know of. I wrote a poem about that. I nice approach and, unfortunate, your ending needs to be well taken.

0 0 Reply
Carol Gall 11 December 2009

a tree is a wonder lovely poem fay 10

0 0 Reply
Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
Close
Error Success