Tuesday, February 5, 2019

Trees And Mountains Are Running Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wow! What a magical perception we have,
Watching the beauty of this running,
We feel wonder behind each shadow,
Perhaps a competition is going on,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dr Antony Theodore 25 May 2019

This bus is running ahead And trees, grass and mountains All are running in diverse direction.. A thing which we see everyday. from that you are able to write a big poem. lovely. thank u dear Kumaramani. tony

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Dogma Daniman 10 February 2019

Like you I also like to have bus journey. This lovely poem is reflection of your natural thought. This wonders mind.

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Michael Walker 06 February 2019

Another stand-out photo and poem. Imaginative and surrealist regarding the feelings which you could well have on a bus trip.

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Bri Edwards 06 February 2019

is bus really ruining or is it running? ;) i would write shaking all its leaves i like tournament of nature. are the plants seeing which can grow the fastest? or are you imagining they are moving when it is actually the bus moving? interesting write. bri (:

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 February 2019

Morning's light! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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